Severus Snape and Melody

Severus wakes up and curses the sun for blinding him. He gets up and yawns. He hears a breath and looks behind him to notice his Melody awake, looking at him with a shy smile.

"Good morning".

He doesn't respond and gets back to bed and lies close to her. He takes her hand, looking at her. To assure him, she smiles back and carresses his hair. He closes his eyes, and enjoys this moment of peace, as the sun shines even more in his bedroom.

so what do you think? am i getting better in coloring?